A TRIP TO THE WORLD OF FANTASY WITH INAS
Wow, its Tuesday again. How fast time flies. It's another week with Inas and today was supposed to be the day to announce the winner of the little poem exercise buy follows of this section on TTB website. But unfortunately we received no post. All the same I still hope lovers of poem get to exercise the poet in them. Today I will be dropping a piece just for your pleasure.
VICTIMIZED
Slowly she built an edge,
Fenced right about her,
With bricks of carefulness,
Fear and ignorance.
And On her gate
was a keep off signage.
It worked; I mean her pledge,
No invaders but kin were far,
Despite her cheerfulness.
The walls grew thicker with
Her Endurance,
Her defence turned her bait,
Naivety; wisdom of her age.
Now she wishes to fledge,
For she is now a prisoner,
Made of rawness, forcefulness
Tinted with "undeemed" clairvoyance.
But in regret she now waits
For a poet to rewrite the page
Of what she's become...
Iπas...
Remember all critiques are welcome...
Post By James Inas
VICTIMIZED
Slowly she built an edge,
Fenced right about her,
With bricks of carefulness,
Fear and ignorance.
And On her gate
was a keep off signage.
It worked; I mean her pledge,
No invaders but kin were far,
Despite her cheerfulness.
The walls grew thicker with
Her Endurance,
Her defence turned her bait,
Naivety; wisdom of her age.
Now she wishes to fledge,
For she is now a prisoner,
Made of rawness, forcefulness
Tinted with "undeemed" clairvoyance.
But in regret she now waits
For a poet to rewrite the page
Of what she's become...
Iπas...
Remember all critiques are welcome...
Post By James Inas
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